Here's some more Alice, I'll post the King and Queen tomorrow...I need to sleep...
JASON:
#1 - there's something really simple and beautiful about this. the torso is clean and really strong. I also want to see a line or shape on the gloves and boots.
#2 - I love the line continuing on the leg. the shape on the glove gives variety and I want to see that repeated on the boots.
#3 - the skirt - not as strong as the previous ones - but the shape on the boots is good
#4 - the goggles are great. seem a little unnecissary with the helmet and the band with the one circle is just such a nice shape i'd hate to lose it. the costume is nice
#5 the design on the gloves - this is great! repeat it on the boots and you got something
#6 - those two lines are nice on the skirt - repeat it on the gloves and boots and it'd be stronger than the squares, I think. I'm not sure how I feel about the lines on the wings - could be amazing - try the lines on the gloves and boots, too - something might be overkill - wont know until you try it.
good job. keep it up.
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